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Manu students find it difficult to pay attention at school. What are the reasons for it ? What could be done to solve this problem?

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 of any nation's future. It is often argued that some people face difficulties to be attentive at
school
.
This
 essay will discuss the reasons behind
this
, and potential solutions to overcome
this
 situation. To embark with, There are several reasons why
students
 get fail to pay attention in
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classroom
classrooms
calssroom
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.
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Firstly
First
,
students
 are so
sensetive
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sensitive
,
therefore
, whenever they become
witness
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a witness
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of
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to
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 their
parents
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 conflicts, they can not get
this
 out
from
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 their head,
conseuqently
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consequently
,
next
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the next
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 day when they go to
school
 they can not pay attention.
Secondly
,
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present
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students
 have become
over obsessed
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to
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 the
gamming
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gaming
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 world because of
this
some times
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sometimes
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 while attending
school
. Apart from
this
, their talks with their friends are
also
 about games. Apart from
this
, their talk with
thier
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their
 friends are
also
 about games, Another cause is some
students
 may feel anxiety about
geeting
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getting
 good academic results while
,
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 some
students
 feel frightened about their performance at
school
this things
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 may discuss them from classroom studies.
On the other hand
, there are some solutions to resolve
this
,problem,
firstly
,
paresent
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present
parent
 should not fight, Infront of their
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children
childrens
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children
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 as it affects their
valuneruble
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vulnerable
 minds.
Secondly
, parents should
limited
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 their children time for
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playing
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paying
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playing
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 games and spend some more time with them to get
update
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 about their day
school
lite
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life
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. In conclusion,
Although
 it is true that there are some causes which
affects
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 children's mind while attending
school
 but aforementioned solutions can save
this
 problem to a
grater
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 extent.
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