Some people prefer to live in hot climates, whereas others love the lifestyle in countries with cold climates. Discuss both views and explain which climate you prefer.

Living in an ideal climate is a crucial factor that affects the quality of life. While some families love to live in cold

areas

, others prefer to move to tropical countries where they can enjoy the sun regularly. In my opinion, I feel joyful when living in a tropical country like Vietnam. Those who enjoy living in snowy places

such

as Scandinavian countries or Germany often feel comfortable when the temperature is not too high. In fact, people are less likely to sweat or

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energy when they live in

low temperature

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nations and may feel more enjoyable.

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, a variety

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of fashion may be a contributing factor that encourages a person to live in these

areas

. Citizens in

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region have to change their outfit regularly to be more appropriate

with

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the outdoor weather.

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, they may have more chance to purchase different types of clothes which may be more diverse compared to those who live in other places.

On the other hand

, inhabitants in

high temperature

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continents are often unable to withstand

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the

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harsh and cold weather condition.

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, some patients with chronic respiratory diseases often find it challenging to live in cold

areas

in

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long

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time

as the weather may worsen their symptoms.

Furthermore

, people from tropic regions

such

as Asia or South America can enjoy the sun and outdoor

activities

throughout the year.

In contrast

, inhabitants in Europe or Canada can only enjoy the sun outside in three months of summer while they have to spend the

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time

on indoor

activities

. As an active person, I enjoy living in nations like Vietnam or Australia where I can have more

time

for outdoor

activities

and it makes me feel proactive in life. In conclusion, there are many reasons that encourage people to live in hot or cold

areas

and I find it more appropriate for me to live in countries like Vietnam or Australia where I can spend more

time

on outdoor

activities

.