Studies have shown that most criminals have low levels of education. Because of this many believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate prisoners so they can get a job after being released. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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level of educational backgrounds. There

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some research

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reports that most of the culprits do not have a sufficient level of education;

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, they ought to be taught

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in order to gain a better job after their prison term. I completely agree with the statement since

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could prevent re-offence as well as enable

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lead a comfortable life.

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teaching some new courses , would provide an excellent opportunity to find

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employment.

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, since these wrongdoers lack

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education,

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may prevent them to be employable. If the situation had happened, they would re-offend to earn money to support both themselves and their family. In India,

for instance

, there some educational programmes are formulated to reintegrate the criminals back to

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which was hugely successful.

Thus

, educating the offenders could bring a bright future for them

Moreover

, usually, those who committed crimes experience difficulties

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, the hardship can be doubled when they illiterate.

As a result

, it seems that they tend to end up doing illegal activities to secure money.

By contrast

, while in jail, enrolling on either degree or vocational course may highlight their profile when they seek a job after the sentence. Eventually, law-abiding citizens could have a peaceful and fearless life. To illustrate, Adu Jose, a notorious criminal from Kerala, now does a business, after getting educated during he was serving his jail term, so it is apparent that

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initiative can be fruitful. In conclusion, assisting to get enrolled in school or college by culprits can make a dramatic change in their life. In my opinion,

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is a great idea as

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could dwindling number of re-offenders and a peaceful future for ex-convicts. It is vitally important to educate those who have been sentenced.