Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which type of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?
Retirement
age
is an age
when every working individual takes a break from work
and gets paid for the services they have done for their company
. Some sociologists believe that having a fixed evacuation age
for everybody irrespective of their occupation is unfair, and certain workers
should be allowed to take an early withdrawal. I completely agree with this
argument and I will indicate my view with examples.
To begin
with, people tend to become weak as they grow older. Different occupations demand different kinds of skills. Certain workers
need physical strength
to perform their duties. This
physical strength
and stamina reduce with age
. While other occupations like office work
demand less physical energy. Hence
, workers
whose work
demands more physical energy need to be given early withdrawal. This
can be illustrated by the workers
in the coal mine whose work
demands strength
and stamina which deteriorates as they grow older. However
, an employee sitting in a library does not need to have much physical strength
.
Additionally
, people who have served a lot for a company
for a longer duration could be given early evacuation. Certain labourers who have dedicated most of their life working for a company
should be allowed to reap the benefits of a pullout at an early age
. For instance
, my father started working for a company
in India at the age
of 20. He was allowed to take early retirement by considering the tenure of his work
in the company
.
In conclusion, having a common evacuation age
for all kinds of employees is unfair. employees whose work
demands more physical energy and workers
who have served their company
for a longer duration should be allowed to take early retirement.Submitted by Chandan Kumar Singh on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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