Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which type of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?
Retirement
age
is an Use synonyms
age
when every working individual takes a break from Use synonyms
work
and gets paid for the services they have done for their Use synonyms
company
. Some sociologists believe that having a fixed evacuation Use synonyms
age
for everybody irrespective of their occupation is unfair, and certain Use synonyms
workers
should be allowed to take an early withdrawal. I completely agree with Use synonyms
this
argument and I will indicate my view with examples.
Linking Words
To begin
with, people tend to become weak as they grow older. Different occupations demand different kinds of skills. Certain Linking Words
workers
need physical Use synonyms
strength
to perform their duties. Use synonyms
This
physical Linking Words
strength
and stamina reduce with Use synonyms
age
. While other occupations like office Use synonyms
work
demand less physical energy. Use synonyms
Hence
, Linking Words
workers
whose Use synonyms
work
demands more physical energy need to be given early withdrawal. Use synonyms
This
can be illustrated by the Linking Words
workers
in the coal mine whose Use synonyms
work
demands Use synonyms
strength
and stamina which deteriorates as they grow older. Use synonyms
However
, an employee sitting in a library does not need to have much physical Linking Words
strength
.
Use synonyms
Additionally
, people who have served a lot for a Linking Words
company
for a longer duration could be given early evacuation. Certain labourers who have dedicated most of their life working for a Use synonyms
company
should be allowed to reap the benefits of a pullout at an early Use synonyms
age
. Use synonyms
For instance
, my father started working for a Linking Words
company
in India at the Use synonyms
age
of 20. He was allowed to take early retirement by considering the tenure of his Use synonyms
work
in the Use synonyms
company
.
In conclusion, having a common evacuation Use synonyms
age
for all kinds of employees is unfair. employees whose Use synonyms
work
demands more physical energy and Use synonyms
workers
who have served their Use synonyms
company
for a longer duration should be allowed to take early retirement.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite