You have seen an advertisement in an Australian Magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-years old Child. Write a letter to the parents, in your letters • Explain why you would like the job • Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ • Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Hello Mr or Madam I am writing to inquire about your advertisement regarding the babysitter requirement. I would say, I can be the right candidate because of the features that I have. I would like to get

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same contract with another lovely family who recently moved to Canada. I am patient with kids and could get along with children for a long time.

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, I am a Piano trainer as well and it is my pleasure to teach your child if you would like.

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spending time with kids is my favourite and always I would like to have young siblings.

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, I would say I spend my weekends riding a bicycle in bosh and mountain which I am happy to share with you if you are interested. I am looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Kind Regards, Emma

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

151 words

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The Greeting

In many counties are investing in new technology to deal with public. Why is this happening? Do you think it is an appropriate use of government money?

Some people think that work is the most important thing in people's lives. Without the success of a career, life will become meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In Some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

With the rise in popularity of the Internet, newspapers will soon become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that once a person becomes a criminal, he will always be a criminal. Do you agree with this statement? Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.