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People are usually confronted with huge amount of advertisements in their life from competing companies. How do you think the advertising industry influences people? And what measures can be adopted to counter the risks of disastrous effects?

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It is true that nowadays
people
 are surrounded by
advertisements
 from companies of all kinds. In my view, these
advertisements
 have influenced potential customers in negative ways and mitigations can be implemented by the industry to minimize these effects. One of the adverse effects that
advertisements
 have on
people
 is causing
purchase
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the purchase
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 of unwanted
low quality
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 products. According to research, most
people
 will be attracted by the
advertisements
 of discounted goods, they are more likely to purchase
those
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apply
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them
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apply
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as a result
.
However
, in most cases, these products do not have the quality that
meet
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meets
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 customers' expectation and will often
ended
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end
be ended
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 up in trash can. One of the mitigations that can be done is to avoid using exaggerated wordings
on
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in
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 the advertisement. Giving potential customers accurate description will ensure that they have a good understanding of what to expect. And
as a result
 of
this
, companies will less likely to get refund
requst
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request
. In conclusion, excessive
advertisements
 will cause
people
 to purchase unwanted goods, ... . The advertising industry should try to use accurate description when creating
advertisements
.
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