You are interested in applying for a new position at your company but have some questions. Write a letter to you boss. In your letter include: Which position you are considering What questions you have about it How your boss can help you decide whether or not to apply. sample ielts answer

Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing
this
letter with regards to the vacant position
for
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of

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Quality
Manager in our Company. I would like to consider the
quality
Manager post in our company because I have been working in the same department as a
Quality
Engineer for 5 years.
Furthermore
, I can assure you that I have very extensive knowledge in
this
field.
In addition
, as I am working
for
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on

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this
project for 2 years, I clearly know the requirements of the client including the procedure of documentation which is one of the most
advantage
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advantages

The singular countable noun advantage follows the quantifier one of, which requires a plural noun. Consider using a plural noun or a different quantifier.

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that I have to complete
this
project. Before applying, I have some queries regarding the other requirements of
this
position. 1. Do I need to complete any specific certifications like ISO 9001:2015 and six sigma? 2. How many years of experience is required to grab
this
oppurtunity
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opportunity

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? 3. Do I need to get any
quality
license from the local government body? I would be grateful if you could help me in deciding for
applying
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forapplying

The phrase following the intransitive verb applying seems to be missing a preposition. Consider adding one.

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this
job. I look forward to receiving your response. Yours faithfully, Sana Ganguly.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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