People should follow the customs and tradition when people start to live in a new. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Every everyone's
country
and region have their own customs
and traditions
. At the present timeAdd a comma
,
life
is getting very busy and advance.People
want to move at
different places for so many different purposes. I am going to explain my views in Change preposition
to
following
paragraphs.
Correct article usage
the following
Firstly
In the advance
Replace the word
advanced
world
Add a comma
,world
people
visit and permanently moved to different countries and states .Some went to different places to get jobs and others going for study purpose.I think they should follow customs
and Correct article usage
the customs
traditions
of country
where they moved and Add an article
the country
also
still follow there
own Correct your spelling
their
traditions
because it is important from my point of viewAdd the comma(s)
, for instance,
for instance
they
when they move to another region and they don't follow Correct pronoun usage
apply
there
Replace the word
their
customs
they look different and awkward in their culture.
Moreover
if they follow Add a comma
,Moreover
there
Correct your spelling
their
traditions
life
would be easy for them also
they can enjoy their life
in better
way . Add an article
a better
people
easily mix up with others .For example
the country
they moving they celebrate different festivals than thry
celebrate in their own Correct your spelling
they
country
they should celebrate all festivals and enjoy their life
. If they don't follow that customs
they feel alone.
To conclude people
should follow the traditions
and customs
where they live in its very necessary to enjoy the life
in good
way and Change the article
a good
also
chance to get knowledge about others culture.Submitted by gurkiran24 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite