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"Developed countries have created many environmental problems. What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?".

#countries #dangers
The most progressed nations have created a life-threatening situation for the rest of the world. Due to their ever-increasing aspirations to gain more power and
weath
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wealth
with
 these countries are not only causing
irrepairable
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irreparable
 damage to mother
earth
,
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 but
also
 creating
life threatening
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 conditions for the inhabitants of the planet.
Firstly
, in the
fast
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last
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 race to produce the latest innovations in science and technology, these nations are constantly threatening
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nature. There is exorbitant deforestation, increasing human habitat, building up of cement and concrete structures
is
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 laying down the foundation for a certain catastrophe. The emissions from the
earth
 are drilling a hole in the protective ozone layer surrounding us.
This
 has led to
penetration
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 of harmful UV rays in our atmosphere. The increasing temperatures, unpredictable weather conditions and fast
meling
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melting
 glaciers and other ice bodies are
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living example of
this
.
On the contrary
, many world bodies are working in collaboration to safeguard our environment from
further
 damage. Widespread measures to rebuild the green cover on the
Earth
's surface are being undertaken.
This
 will not only help in
reduction
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 of harmful radiation reaching the inhabitants on
this
 piece of land but
also
 restore natural ecological balance.
Immediate
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 ban on
testing
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 of nuclear weapons must be imposed on all developed countries, proper disposal of non-biodegradable waste products and reduction in usage of plastic must be emphasized. To conclude, I reckon, it is imperative that the developed nations
earth
 understand the severity of the situation and respond immediately with emergency measures to prevent global warming.
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