Nowadays many jobs are more stressful and the working day is longer. What are the reasons for this? What can employers do to help employees?

The line graph illustrates information about the number of people without a job in the United
States
and Great
Britain
in the
year
2008 and 2015. Overall, from the graph , it is clear that the United
States
showed growth, while
Britain
remained stable.
However
, both countries experienced some fluctuation in those seven years. In 2008, Unites
States
started with a percentage of 5%.
Then
it climbed rapidly to almost 10% in 2010. From here, the rate of unemployed people plummet gradually and reached 8% in 2013, at the same rate as
Britain
. In the final
year
, the percentage dropped considerably to just under 6%.
Britain
started with the same amount as the United
States
in the
first
year
.
Then
it increased sharply to approximately 8% in 2010.
This
remained stable for one
year
and jumped slightly to just over 8% in 2012 by crossing the US rate. In 2015, it decreased to about 5,5%.
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