Some people today prefer to get advice for medical problems and do not want to visit a doctor. Why is this? Is it a positive change or negative?

Nowadays
people
are getting more independent than ever before, as
first
they are trying to solve any problems by themselves without seeking help from the experts. There is
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same scenario for medical concerns. Most
of
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the
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people
prefer to get
advice
from different resources without going to a doctor. I believe
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this
is a negative trend.
This
essay is set to discuss
this
trend along with
suitable
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conclusion.
First
of all,
the
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internet technology is
one
of the major reasons behind
this
change.
People
can get detailed knowledge about any health conditions, starting from the reason of the sickness,symptoms and treatment at
finger tips
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within seconds.
However
, all the site on the internet is not providing factual information. For
intance
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instance
, if
one
is suffering from a cough for a long
time
and he searches on
internet
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regarding the problem,
one
will get a list of diseases and tuberculosis is
also
one
of
it
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. But
one
can
has
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a normal flu
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and it can take a long
time
to resolve
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on individuals' immune system.
As a result
of
this
,
one
can get depressed thinking about it.
On the other hand
, there are numerous
benifits
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benefits
of getting
advice
for medical problems. In the past,
people
were not aware
about
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more medical illness, they were getting little or no knowledge about the condition from doctors. At
this
time
,
people
are getting
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knowledge about medical conditions, consequences and try to treat
it
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by themselves.
For instance
, if
one
is suffering from obesity, he can get a lot of options to treat it without seeing any instructor. He can get a lot of options like thousands of exercises, diet plans which are helpful. The reason behind
this
trend is that it is easy to access.
Moreover
, it costs nothing to get medical
advice
.
Also
, most of the
time
one
is able to find easy to follow remedies. To sum up, it can be concluded that , it is a
benificial
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beneficial
thing no doubt in it. Other factors should
be consider
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like it is not
benificial
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beneficial
in each
cases
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. Medical illness varies with individuals.
Therefore
it is
advicable
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advisable
available
to get Doctor’s
advice
.
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