many jobs used to be done at home by hand but nowadays an increasing number of them are done using machines instead. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development
A decade ago,
people
preferred to do all house chores manually and they did not accept the science invention. At present, the community prefer machines
for house chores. This
trend has positive as well as negative impact on people
's life
. This
essay will discuss its advantages and disadvantages in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with, there are a plethora of benefits of using machines
to do tasks at home
. Nowadays, every home
has machines
such
as blender, washing machines
, dishwasher, juicer and so on. It makes our life
easier. For instance
, someone wants to wash a bucket of clothes
if he washes this
attire with his hand it will obviously take an hour and also
he will do more hard work to wash clothes
. If he washes these clothes
with a machine. It will hardly take 15 minutes to wash a bucket of clothes
. Hence
, It is the fastest and easy way to use machines
in our daily life
. Machines
make our life
easier.
On the other hand
, there are also
some demerits to use machines
at home
. People
's lifestyle becomes more sedentary. They do not work out to remain fit. For instance
, now there is a machine for mopping previously people
mopped manually and they were fit. In a survey, it was found that mopping burnt 1200 calories. Nowadays, people
are suffering from heart disease, cholesterol, obesity due to a sedentary lifestyle.
To conclude, there are lots of merits using machines
at home
such
as it saves time and convenient to use. Whereas due to machines
people
's life
become sedentary and they suffer from obesity, cholesterol and so on.Submitted by Rajwinder Kaur on
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