You have recently started attending hobby classes in your city. Your mother in your hometown wants to know about it. Write a letter to your mother. In the letter, mention: What class are you taking? How do you like it? How long will you take the classes?

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Dear Mumma, How are you? Hope

this

letter finds you in good health.

Although

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it's

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a short time since we met, it seems much longer. I wanted to tell you about the recent photography classes I have enrolled

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. As you know, since childhood, I have always had a soft corner for photography and luckily as my new job timings are flexible, I was able to enrol. It all started back in the month of January, once I returned from home and with time, I have started loving the sessions.

Moreover

, looking at my performance, a famous wedding photographer offered me an internship with his brand. I am planning to join him as soon as my training is complete. The

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for which I have enrolled is a 15 weeks course. In

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, every weekend 6 hours sessions happen, and they

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take us out for field activities which indeed is a great way to learn different tricks and analyzing the kind of work we can get in future. I hope you are excited about the passion; I am following and will come over to see me soon. Love, Richa

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

191 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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