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Band 4.5

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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Dear
james
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James
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, I am
writting
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writing
 to apologize for the
inconvinience
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inconvenience
 being caused to you owing to the disturbance coming from my house.My kitchen's
ceilng
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ceiling
 is leaking
from
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for
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last
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the last
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 two
day
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days
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,as it needs
a
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apply
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repair.It is very hard
me
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for me
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 to cook.So,I called the
plumber
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,
however
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,he has turned quite to be unprofessional.
Altough
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Although
work
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 could be done in
daytime
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,the
plumber
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 needed my presence in
evening
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the evening
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 in order to understand the plan.
Unfortunalty
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Unfortunately
,
beacuse
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because
 of
lack
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a lack
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 of knowledge,the
plumber
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 is taking too much time to complete the
work
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.I know you will be up in arms over noise from my house and I am really sorry for all the trouble and distress you are facing in the evening
from
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last
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the last
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days
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few days
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. I completely understand that you need to relax after a hectic day.As the kitchen
work
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 is still unfinished,I have decided that I will hire a professional
plumber
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 and get the
work
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 done in
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the day-time
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day-time
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daytime
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. Once again I am
extremerly
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extremely
 sorry for all the trouble, Yours Trustly, Amanpreet
kaur
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Kaur
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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