In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this?

Working in teenagehood have always been popular in certain cultures. It is argued by some that

this

behaviour is not positive, whereas others believe

otherwise

, because it will contribute

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developing certain skills. I strongly defend that each

person

needs to be free to

work

and profit from valuables experiences.

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, the main reason that youngers ought to

work

as soon as they can is

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they become a more reliable

person

since they take daily responsibilities.

Consequently

, adults who have been engaged in some paid

work

since childhood are better employees than those who started their professional life after school. Mainly it is explained because they have acquired a broad experience into being accountable for their role

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a long time. Experience broads a

person

’s horizon and provides self-confidence. Another important matter is that a

person

tends to be more generous and more empathetic since they have

widly

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widely

acquired some skills which only may come by having a job. Certain

charactheristics

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characteristics

are only possible to be developed when a

person

is exposed to several daily situations.

Therefore

, having a job makes a

person

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aim high,

to

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focus on self-improvement and become better at

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with others and certainly become a better human being. Money is

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second

regard, which is

also

quite important, but the main role

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developing an individual.

Hence

to conclude, several nations still

opose

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oppose

opposed

to

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early job exposure and others believe

that is

extremely important that early responsibility. I believe that

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valuable

work

as well as having your own money only sets a

person

free.

Besides

this

willingness, it strongly contributes to

make

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a

person

being a

skillful

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professional and a better human being.