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Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employers. Do you agree or disagree?

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With the advent of
modern
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day
 computer and modems,
work
 from
home
 ought to be encouraged since it is beneficial for managers and working staff,
instead
 of going to
to
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office
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the office
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everyday
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. In my opinion, I agree that working from
home
 should be encouraged as it helps everyone save a lot of
time
. It makes it easier for people to organize their
time
 better. It
also
help
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 everybody get back to their social life as soon as
work
 ends. Working from
home
 motivates people to plan their
day
 better and use their crucial
time
 doing actual
work
instead
 of wasting
quarter
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 of it during commute and breaks. It helps employees to be
a
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better organizer as they are managing themselves at their end.
This
 gives them a sense of responsibility to perform efficiently with ease of mind. Performing your routine
work
 from
home
 give managers and employees
better
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 sense of managing snd organizing their
time
.
For example
, managers can see when their staff member logs into the system and how many hours of the
day
 they spend working, both employee and management staff is available for a quick meeting
anytime
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 of the
day
 while performing their tasks.
This
 ensures a check and balance on both ends. Sitting on a computer at
home
 doing your office
work
, helps people get back to their social life immediately after finishing
work
.
This
 helps everyone to keep a good
work
-life balance and participate actively in their social circle resulting in feeling content with their life and
work
 overall. In conclusion, working from
home
 should be highly encouraged in
this
day
 and age as it facilitates
in
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increased workforce productivity, saves a lot of
time
 and gives ample
time
 for
after
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work
 activities.
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