buy goods and services almost every day. Some
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age groups have different trends of shopping. I strongly agree with
because the measure of shopping is different by age and frequency changes as well.
reason why I support
is that the ways that
shop change by generations.
, the younger generation tends to
online shops, while elderly
be prone to actual stores.
who were born after 1980 are called the "digital native", and they raised with the Internet and related services.
, seniors hardly
e-commerce, since they unwilling to disclose their personal information on the Internet
, some young
not only purchase products from larger shops,
as Amazon.com and Rakuten, they
buy products from individuals through social networking services.
On top of that, another reason why I assume that the shopping habits vary by age groups is that youngsters shop more often than the old generation. In fact, teenagers more likely to buy clothes more frequently. As
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of inexpensive fashion brands,
as H&M, ZARA and UNIQLO, they are able to get these whenever they want.
On the other hand
, there were fewer options when the old generation was young.
As a result
, they tend to shop less and still
the same thing longer.
To conclude, I reiterate my complete agreement with the topic.
is because there are two opposite trends regarding shopping which are the
of e-commerce and frequency.