People’s shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factor. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,
people
buy goods and services almost every day. Some
people
insist that
people
who belong
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age groups have different trends of shopping. I strongly agree with
this
because the measure of shopping is different by age and frequency changes as well.
To begin
with, the
first
reason why I support
this
is that the ways that
people
shop change by generations.
For example
, the younger generation tends to
use
online shops, while elderly
people
be prone to actual stores.
People
who were born after 1980 are called the "digital native", and they raised with the Internet and related services.
In contrast
, seniors hardly
use
e-commerce, since they unwilling to disclose their personal information on the Internet
Furthermore
, some young
people
not only purchase products from larger shops,
such
as Amazon.com and Rakuten, they
also
buy products from individuals through social networking services. On top of that, another reason why I assume that the shopping habits vary by age groups is that youngsters shop more often than the old generation. In fact, teenagers more likely to buy clothes more frequently. As
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of inexpensive fashion brands,
such
as H&M, ZARA and UNIQLO, they are able to get these whenever they want.
On the other hand
, there were fewer options when the old generation was young.
As a result
, they tend to shop less and still
use
the same thing longer. To conclude, I reiterate my complete agreement with the topic.
This
is because there are two opposite trends regarding shopping which are the
use
of e-commerce and frequency.

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