Many companies today sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that this is a good thing for the world of sport. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In the modern era, as
sports
are very popular among
people
of all ages,
the
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advertising
companies
take advantage by promoting their
products
through these events. Indeed,
the
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sponsoring
the
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sports
not only benefits the
companies
but
also
sports
as a whole .According to
me
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,
a
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promotion of
sports
through advertisements is a good way to encourage
sports
stars and general
people
to indulge in it. Certainly, when a company sponsor frolic activities, it helps organizer to cultivate
sportsman
and improve infrastructure along with help
companies
to promote their product on a wider scale. Of course to provide high-quality training to a
sports
team with special equipment, not possible without spending a huge amount of money.
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– In 1998 neither big
companies
wants
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sponsor
the
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Indian women hockey nor wants to connect their name with them. As a
,
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result
orgnizer
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organizer

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had to face many difficulties to train the team and
orgnaize
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organize
organized

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the event.
In addition
to that
sports
are food for the brain and large of
people
watch
sports
. So if
companies
advertise their
products
through
sports
, they have a large audience and
an
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acceptance rate of
products
are high.
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– If a cracker wear wristband of some brand, his follower starts using that brand. So it's favourable for both
companies
as well as
sports
. On the flip side, along with these
advantages
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,advantages

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it
also
has some adverse effect on society. As
people
blindanly
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blindly

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follow their
favorite
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sportsman
in that case whatever
advertisment
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advertisement

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they
are do
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they start using that. So if
sportsman
promotes any
alchohol
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alcohol

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or
tabacoo
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tobacco

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products
kid/ young generation
start
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taking that without
thinkng
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thinking

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its
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severe effects.
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– A
survay
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published in daily
news paper
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newspaper

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number of
tabacoo
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tobacco

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and alcohol consumption increased in kids after
sportsman
start
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promoting these
products
. Along with
this
puttng
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putting

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lots of
advertisment
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advertisement

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on
ground
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the ground

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, on the
side bars
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sidebars

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, on
sportsman
’s
tshirt
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shirt
t-shirt
T-shirt

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some time make the watching experience verse, as
instead
of
sports
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sportspeople

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people
diverted to that
advertisment
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advertisement

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. In conclusion, there is a
sgnificant
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significant

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advantage of
sponsering
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sponsoring

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commercials in
sports
to nurture the
sportsman
and promote the
sports
globaly
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globally
global

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and
also
promot
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promote

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commercal
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commercial

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to large scale.

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