Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion.

Artificially intelligent
robots
have taken place of manpower in most of the workplaces day by day. Though
,
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mechanical devices will takeover huge portion of
workforces
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still, there will be some
jobs
which
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will require operations by the human touch or
power
. Gradually,
robots
will
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takeover
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most of the non-skilled and non-complex human
work
.
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number of companies would prefer to invest one time in a mechanical device to handle their
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work load
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rather
hiring
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individual and paying them every month for the same
work
.
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companies like the Amazone prefer to have an automated infrastructure and their
robots
are performing precisely speedy
taskes
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tasks

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compared to human
power
. Due to these reasons, there are
lot
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of chances that
number
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a number
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of
jobs
will be performed by
an
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artificial intelligence .
On the other hand
, there are some
taskes
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which can never be replaced by
robots
as it only requires human touch and brain.
Robots
will not be able to cope with
such
highly demanding task because
,
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robot
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only respond to the things that are programmed in their system. These
jobs
include doing experiments, surgeries
erc
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.
Robots
will never be able to achieve what has taken social evolution hundreds of thousands of years to achieve. In conclusion, there are
majority
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the majority
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of chances that
large
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a large
the large

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number of
employment
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employees

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will be taken over by
robots
instead
of humans. Unskilled
worke
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workers
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will be executed by automated machines
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whereas

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where as
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, skilled
work
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will always be done by human
power
.
Finally
, there will be few
jobs
which
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will still require human execution rather than robotic
power
.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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