Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion.

Artificially intelligent
robots
have taken place of manpower in most of the workplaces day by day. Though
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mechanical devices will takeover huge portion of
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still, there will be some
jobs
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will require operations by the human touch or
power
. Gradually,
robots
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takeover
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most of the non-skilled and non-complex human
work
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number of companies would prefer to invest one time in a mechanical device to handle their
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rather
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individual and paying them every month for the same
work
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companies like the Amazone prefer to have an automated infrastructure and their
robots
are performing precisely speedy
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tasks
compared to human
power
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of chances that
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of
jobs
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artificial intelligence .
On the other hand
, there are some
taskes
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tasks
which can never be replaced by
robots
as it only requires human touch and brain.
Robots
will not be able to cope with
such
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robot
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only respond to the things that are programmed in their system. These
jobs
include doing experiments, surgeries
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etc
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Robots
will never be able to achieve what has taken social evolution hundreds of thousands of years to achieve. In conclusion, there are
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of chances that
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number of
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will be taken over by
robots
instead
of humans. Unskilled
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workers
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, skilled
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will always be done by human
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power
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  • automation
  • robotics
  • futuristic developments
  • analyze data
  • analytical precision
  • human capabilities
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