Some people think that children under 18 years old should receive full-time education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many well-developed countries have an

education

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policy for their kids

upto

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up to

18

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age

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of age

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for a completed

study

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which is giving good results to their

nations

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.

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,It is commonly believed that

children

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under 18

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age

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should be allowed for a full-term

study

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and I totally agree with

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and support

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argument and will provide my evidence.

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study

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the study

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is the primary right of every child in the country and they are allowed to

study

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during school-going age. To put it

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, wealthy and healthy

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can only be built when the teenagers of the

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are well educated.

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, all political parties in the country should come forward with a strong

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bill

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as youth under 18

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old should go to

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and no work.The governments should

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provide the basic requirements to school-going

children

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like

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a uniform

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, books and healthy food at free of cost which allows poor families

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send their youngsters to institutions.

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, many local survey results proved that the school-going

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number got spiked up after an

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bill was passed by the state government declares free uniform,shoes and mid-day meals in all schools.

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, when the youth started going to school and gets

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then

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crime

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rate in the living communities will

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be reduced as the kids get an opportunity to learn

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apply

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good manners and that eventually beneficial to the societies and

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to the

nation

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.

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, the more

education

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we provide to

children

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under 18

years

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the more intelligent youth we can build for the growth of the

nation

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.

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, full-time

education

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gives more time to

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and many students will

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become

responsibile

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responsible

persons for their

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.Though providing full access to

study

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needs investment but the end results will be much

more high

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. In conclusion, when a full-time

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is offered to young teenagers up to 18

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old

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the advantages

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huge to the communities and

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to the

nation

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and

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students can be part of

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the well-being of the nation

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nations

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well-being. Though it is not easy to provide a complete

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that involves some expenditure,

government

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the government

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should take

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a serious concern and implement good

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policies.