Some people think that children under 18 years old should receive full-time education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many well-developed countries have an

education

policy for their kids

upto

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up to

18

years

age

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for a completed

study

which is giving good results to their

nations

.

Thus

,It is commonly believed that

children

under 18

years

age

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of age

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should be allowed for a full-term

study

and I totally agree with

this

and support

this

argument and will provide my evidence.

Firstly

,

study

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the study

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is the primary right of every child in the country and they are allowed to

study

during school-going age. To put it

in other words

, wealthy and healthy

nations

can only be built when the teenagers of the

nation

are well educated.

Hence

, all political parties in the country should come forward with a strong

education

bill

such

as youth under 18

years

old should go to

study

and no work.The governments should

also

provide the basic requirements to school-going

children

like

uniform

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a uniform

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, books and healthy food at free of cost which allows poor families

also

send their youngsters to institutions.

For example

, many local survey results proved that the school-going

children

number got spiked up after an

education

bill was passed by the state government declares free uniform,shoes and mid-day meals in all schools.

On the other hand

, when the youth started going to school and gets

education

then

crime

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rate in the living communities will

also

be reduced as the kids get an opportunity to learn

the

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good manners and that eventually beneficial to the societies and

further

to the

nation

.

Moreover

, the more

education

we provide to

children

under 18

years

the more intelligent youth we can build for the growth of the

nation

.

For instance

, full-time

education

gives more time to

study

and many students will

then

become

responsibile

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responsible

persons for their

nations

.Though providing full access to

study

needs investment but the end results will be much

more high

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. In conclusion, when a full-time

study

is offered to young teenagers up to 18

years

old

then

the advantages

is

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huge to the communities and

further

to the

nation

and

such

students can be part of

the

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the well-being of the nation

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nations

well-being. Though it is not easy to provide a complete

education

that involves some expenditure,

government

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the government

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should take

this

a serious concern and implement good

study

policies.