Imagine that you are given the power to make any one of your dreams come true. Which dream would you choose? Write about the dream that is most important to you and why you would most want it to come true.

I had a dream yesterday. It was a nice dream, I dreamed that I was in my
first
house, the one near the beach, it is not that big, but warm, my relative always
like
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likes
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to stop by
vist
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visit
us. They like BBQ in our garden, they
like
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sit our garden, enjoy
sunshine
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the sunshine
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, and tali rk to each other. I really missed that house of my family, near the beach. Now I lived apartment in the city
center
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, there did easy to buy the food, even
in
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the
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apply
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midnight, everything you want, just so easy to buy, and
also
easy find station of subway, train, bus, and taxi. My school mate
love
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my city, but I missed so much my
first
house
,
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but
sold
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itsold
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