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In many cities an increasing number of people do not know their neighbors and there is a lack of sense of of community. what are the causes of this problem? how can it be solved ?

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nowadays the discussion about the
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interaction between
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 has sparked off an
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 debate among the citizens. In my honest opinion, it is
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 from massive urbanisations and
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 government budget on education campaign may
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 is
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. It is
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 about the fact that, with the initiation of the large scale urbanisation, one of the
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 and devastating consequences is, result from the high rate of which individuals get
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 the urban or the CBD, it is nearly impossible for all the individuals to have
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 amount of interactions with the
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 that are enough to build up a , as suggested in the title , strong senes of community.
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, distracted by the high pressure in the city, most people may unable to have a strong relationship with the others like their
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neighbours
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 the absence of the
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sense
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 may occur. Speaking of the measurement that can be imposed to tackle with
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 strongly
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 is to , by using the government fiscal budget, initiate different types of activities that require the deep involvement
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among
 all the citizens, one
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 the entire community to celebrate the festivals. to sum
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 the
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 fact, the overall growth of the city worldwide is the blame for
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 government campaign may to some extent present a solution to it
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