In many cities an increasing number of people do not know their neighbors and there is a lack of sense of of community. what are the causes of this problem? how can it be solved ?

nowadays the discussion about the
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has sparked off an
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debate among the citizens. In my honest opinion, it is
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from massive urbanisations and
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government budget on education campaign may
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. It is
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about the fact that, with the initiation of the large scale urbanisation, one of the
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and devastating consequences is, result from the high rate of which individuals get
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the urban or the CBD, it is nearly impossible for all the individuals to have
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amount of interactions with the
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that are enough to build up a , as suggested in the title , strong senes of community.
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, distracted by the high pressure in the city, most people may unable to have a strong relationship with the others like their
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may occur. Speaking of the measurement that can be imposed to tackle with
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strongly
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is to , by using the government fiscal budget, initiate different types of activities that require the deep involvement
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all the citizens, one
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fact, the overall growth of the city worldwide is the blame for
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government campaign may to some extent present a solution to it
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sense of community
  • urbanization
  • high-rise buildings
  • gated communities
  • digital communication
  • social media
  • instant messaging
  • face-to-face interaction
  • transience
  • busy schedules
  • work commitments
  • family responsibilities
  • personal hobbies
  • physical barriers
  • casual socialization
  • safety concerns
  • crime
  • urban dwellers
  • housing affordability
  • stable communities
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