Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both the opinion and give your own view.

In the contemporary era, There are 90%
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learning foreign in
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. Few people think that the only
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reason
for learning a foreign
language
is in order to travel to or work in a foreign
country
.
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Others
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say that these are not merely reasons. I shall discuss both
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and my personal opinion in
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paragraphs. Some
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people think
that, foreign
language
is extremely important for work and travel in
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country
. Because, if they know
foreign
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language
. They can understand and explain their
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feelings
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.
Furthermore
, Nobody can cheat and wrong with them.
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, if someone
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know
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language
. Employer or
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other
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with him. On
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side, few people think that they can travel to or work in a foreign
country
without foreign
languages
. Everywhere have translater in
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and they think that their own native
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more important than foreign
languages
. I would like to write down that foreign
language
is very important. it's extremely
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in
foreign
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a foreign
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country
. If we know
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another language
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language
our
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knowledge
will
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and will not face any difficulties related communication. But we should know our
language
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Finally
, the mother tung is more important than other
languages
. To conclude, it can be said that "
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every
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" in the same everyone have own view and valuable for them. but my point of view is more important for me.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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