Behavior in schools is getting worse. explain the causes of this problem and suggest some possible solutions.

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era, schools are much different
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they have 50 years back. Children’s
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school
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also
changed and getting worst day by day. Indeed, there should be some protocol that school and children should follow to
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the decorum of the school.In
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cause
use
of
this
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of
behaviour
and suggest some measure how to deal with
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causes of bad
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epidemic of disrespect
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among
students.
Firstly
,
Parents
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before, as breadwinner have to go
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work and mothers are busy
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household things so in
this
situation kids are feeling alone indulge themself
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bad companies.
Secondly
, increase
access
time
of social media as children are free to browse any
kind
of content on social media
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channels
they easily get exposure to the content
that is
not age
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appropriate
in addition
to that, it
also
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FOMO and feeling of inadequacy,
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dissatisfaction
and isolation. In turn,
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negatively
affect children’s
behaviour
. Clearly,
parents
need to take some action to control
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kind
of activities.
First
and foremost,
parents
need to schedule their
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according to their children’s
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and spend
time
with them.
In addition
to that, discuss their problems and try to rectify that.
Secondly
, create some protocols for social media
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when to
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,where to
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and what they are
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watching
.
However
, kids not like protocols, it will helpful for them in
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future
. In conclusion, no matter how much schools get modernise,
chilldren
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children
shoulld
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should
follow basic
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athletes
and
parents
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their
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behaviour
as its will impact their future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Discipline
  • Respect for authority
  • Confrontational
  • Cyberbullying
  • Overcrowded
  • Curriculum
  • Engagement
  • Mental health
  • Parental involvement
  • Social-emotional learning (SEL)
  • Classroom management
  • Trusting environment
  • Anxiety
  • Stress
  • Behavioral intervention
  • Facilities
  • Resource allocation
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