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Because of modern technology, some people believe that it is no longer necessary for people to learn handwriting skills, but others believe that handwriting is still an important skill. Discuss both views and give your opinion based on your experience.

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In
this
 modern era of advancement,technological gadgets play a significant role in everyone's life. A section of society asserts that children should not invest their time to hone writing skills. While some opine that it is still important even in today's world.
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 arguments with my opinion in the conclusion.
To begin
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 outdated practice to follow. So it becomes irrelevant to focus on writing. An article published in The Tribune stated that
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 of University students taking notes through mobile phone and tablets rather than in written form. Apart from
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, handwriting is linked to learning spell
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 function to check the spell.
Therefore
 less time should be spent on
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On the other hand
, handwriting is an art. It not only helps to express the views but
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 many calligraphers sell their works and make
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 of money.
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 between cognition and
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writing
 by hand.
Therefore
 children learn more when they are forced to write something by hand. In conclusion,both the arguments have their own benefits,
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 in my opinion, these skills should be encouraged because
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 the peculiar advantages.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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