Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should, therefore, be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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In today's world,

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are becoming very essential in everyone's day to day life. Some people think that

computers

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should be introduced in the classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes.

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, some people think that that dependence on

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in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to

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. I will explain my reasoning in

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essay.

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, I think introducing

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in the classrooms can have so many advantages.

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students

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do not need to bring so many books in their backpacks. They can bring only their laptops to study all subjects. When I was in school we do not have permission to bring the device to the school. So, we have to bring all subjects book and their notebooks. The whole backpacks weigh almost 6 to 7 kg. The advantages of having

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in the classrooms are that they can record the lecture and can have access to the lecture at any

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will help

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to take notes easier and help them to study.

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, I think having

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in the classroom will have some risk to the

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. In

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modern world,

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already have smart devices

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as tablets, mobile phones etc. They spend most of their free

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surfing on the internet. And , if we have

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in the classroom,

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will force them to spend more

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looking at the screen.

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will have a certain risk to their mental as well as physical health. Seeing too much on the screen can affect your eyes in the long term.

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, in order to concentrate on the conversation in the lecture using the computer student need headphones, which can cause damage to their ears. In conclusion, I think having

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can have both positive and negative impacts on the

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lives. The school should restrict

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to spend less

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computers

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and spend more

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reading the contents from the book. Because reading from the book will not have a negative effect on the student's eyes.

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Some people are off the opinion that giving a good first impression at an interviewer is the key securing a good job. To what extent do you agree?

It is generally observed that almost all high level jobs are done by men. Does it mean that the government should encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women? Do you agree or disagree with this proposition.