Your colleague is traveling from another country by plane for a meeting. You have arranged the airport pickup, hotel accommodation and planned his/her meetings. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, you should: • say when and where you will meet him/her • explain where he/she will stay • tell him/her about the other arrangements you made.

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Dear Jack, I am anxiously waiting for your arrival in our country. It’s been too long since we

last

met when I came to AUSTRALIA for business meetings. The management has assigned me all the responsibilities of arranging for your accommodations since we know each other personally and it would be convenient and comfortable for you as well. I am writing to you to give you the details about the same to avoid any inconvenience at the

last

moment. I have made arrangements for the AC cab that will pick you up from the airport and will drop you at your hotel “The Taj”. It is a five-star hotel and just 20

minutes

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drive away from the airport. I have done bookings for a deluxe room in your name so that you can easily check in there without any hustle. You can take complete rest for the day, as I have scheduled all the meetings for the

day in the hall no.-1 of the same hotel. As you will be occupied for the

first

two days of your business tour, I have planned to meet up with you on weekend. For

this

, I have arranged a small party at my place for you, wherein some of our colleagues would be joining us. It will a great chance for us to spend some time together. You can call me anytime on my no-9854756238 if you face any discomfort. Waiting to see you soon. Yours Sincerely, Rahul

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

246 words

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