A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food

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Dear

Ramchandran

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Ramachandran

I’m

writing

this

letter to get some information about your country, society and culture before I leave.

First

of all, thanks for your invitation to visit India, I’ve not been there before. I was planning to buy some gifts for your family. I need your advice, if the baby doll, small chip games for your two kids and a famous perfume from Dubai will be suitable for your wife. Do let me know in case

I’m

anyone in your family.

I’m

visiting there for the

first

time in my life, so

I’m

not aware of the different activities in the month of October there, as every society and culture has different festivals according to their belief. I

also

want to know about weather

condition

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conditions

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usually in October my country is hot, so

accordingly

I’ll carry the clothes.

I’m

not sure about what type of food you like most, but

I’m

vegetarian so I want to know if that’s easily available in your country or area. You know,

I’m

a foodie, and the taste of a meal changes the mood. Keep in touch Vishal

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

185 words

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