You recently celebrated a special occasion in your personal life and received a card and a present from your colleagues at work. Write a letter to your colleagues. In your letter: remind your colleagues what the special occasion you were celebrating was thank them for the card and gift explain why you like the gift and how you will use it

Dear colleagues, I am writing
this
letter to remind and thank you for the card and gift you gave me on my 3rd anniversary. It was a small get together with family on my wedding anniversary. I remember we all were dancing and suddenly rang a doorbell and I saw a courier boy who brought a cake, a beautiful card and two tickets for South India's trip. It was really a surprise moment for me. The card is very beautiful which reminds me of love and your present for the trip is really exciting. I have searched so many places in South India and
also
arrange everything there. My wife and I thank you from the core of my heart for making our day more special. I will show you all my photographs when I will return after a trip. We will arrange a small party for you all. Once again thank you. Yours truly Tapan
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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