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Nowadays people are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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In recent years, the quantity of waste produced has increased drastically. The
usage
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 of disposable items is one of the major reasons for
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, the government needs to pay serious attention
towards
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this
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 issue by implementing more restrictions or if possible impose a ban in certain cases.
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majority
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 of the industries have switched to
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usage
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 of non-reusable
products
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 due to its
cost saving
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 factor.
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, Food outlets and restaurants have replaced ceramic plates and steel spoons with plastic due to lost cost and
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 and throw' factor.
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, all metal parts in various industries are replaced with plastic items, from car parts to mobile phones. These numbers are increasing at
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 alarming rate. These
products
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 are
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 for
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people but overall, cannot be disposed
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 used completely. As a remedy, the government should impose strict restrictions on importing
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products
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 in their policy.
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, they should ban
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usage
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 of plastic
products
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 in the food industry and encourage more eco-friendly alternatives
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 as paper items.
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, making our branded coffee shops and local stores obliged to use
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paper cups and bags will definitely help in less trash daily.
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, promoting and spreading awareness in public will help to improve
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 detrimental issue.
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, efforts
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 as these will minimize the rubbish. In conclusion, it is certainly undeniable that our society is producing a lot of non-recyclable waste, mainly consisting
plastics
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of plastics
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 materials. To cope up with
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 problem, the government should take strict measures to control the production and
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 of these hazardous
products
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