Some people feel that boarding school are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.

It is often said that boarding

school

has the best education

system

for all

children

, especially in today’s technology-

foccused

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focused

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However

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the other people argue the idea

with

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several

reason

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.

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essay will discuss the debate and give a concluding

view

. On the one hand, the proponent of

this

view

state the various benefit can be made from

this

activity to the

children

. The

first

idea is that boarding

school

provides a better environment for

student

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.

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is because every pupil could concentrate more

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studying since all of their time are spent in

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school

. The other arguments

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the fact that

this

system

could help the parent to watch their kids. The participant of

this

boarding

school

will be

monitorized

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monitored

by the

school

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and they are possible to prevent the

children

from worse activities which appear very often nowadays

such

as crimes, street brawls, drugs, and the other.

On the other hand

, those who against

this

view point

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out that

this

education

system

will have a bad effect

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family relationship. It would

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that the

school

could abolish the golden time

betwen

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between

the

children

and their family when they have a distance from their home. The other reasons for

this

view

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about the price.

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is an

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fact that almost every boarding

school

has a higher charge since they have to

fullfil

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fulfil

every student requirements.

This

leads to the condition when some families are not possible to afford the expense standard. Another well-known argument is that

this

curriculum will increase the stress rate for the student. They could be hard to refresh their feeling because of pressure from a lot of assignment, homework, or the other tasks which come from the tutor.

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would be impractical since every target which

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planned

to

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the students would be difficult to be done. Overall, it seems that the decision to stay in boarding

school

should be based on the child’s interest, family’s

economy

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level, and the rate of stress caused by

this

education

system

. It is sensible to conclude that the family’s consideration is very important to decide whether methods are suitable for their

children

.