Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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These days,learning other languages become more important in our life like English.There are many reasons for
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it will help you while you travel and will help your life here.to illustrates, when you have your own business you have to communicate with foreign companies of course it will be easy when you know their
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in our country now we have a lot of visitors and foreign workers we can't deal with them if we don't talk their languages.
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now we are in 2021 so all our subjects at the university are English so if we don't learn we will be in huge trouble
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mean learning English main important in our study life.If
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to make our work easy and fast when we deal with foreign parents and staff. In conclusion,After careful analysis
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will say the learning of foreign languages important for more than 4 reasons and we have to teach our children before
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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