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Large companies should pay higher standard to CEOS and Executives compared to other workers. To What extent do you agree or disagree

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It's true that big
organisation
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 provide high salaries to CEOs and Executive compared to
employees
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, while I accept that it seems that lower
employees
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 exploited by top-management but the
organisation
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 important decision regarding growth and profit earn and management done by the top
level
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.So, In my ,opinion they have a major right in profit earn's by the
company
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. As well as it's impractical the
organisation
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 provide equal salary to all different hierarchy of employee. On the one hand, The
responsibility
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 to run the business is on Top-Hierarchy which include the CEO & the Executive. The middle
level
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 includes the manager and supervisor who has the
responsibility
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 to implement the Rule and Regulation of Top- Management as well summits the reports where as well as submit the reports whereas the lower
level
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 include Labours and workers who have the
responsibility
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 to
work
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 according to top-
level
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 hierarchy.
As a result
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, it's not possible to provide equal remuneration to all the different
level
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 of
employees
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. They have different
work
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 and
responsibility
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 in the
company
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.
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, Some companies do not pay equal remuneration to
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work
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 done by a middle and lower
level
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 of employee. They exploit their
employees
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 by underpaid salaries .
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, It increases
employees
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 turnover, Increases dissatisfaction among
employees
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 and strike. Nowadays
employees
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 have the right and different opportunity to
work
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 for another
company
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 or file against the
organisation
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 under labour laws
such
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 as the Minimum Wages Act. In practical terms, In every large ,
company
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 there is an H.R and Union Leader who complain on behalf of the
employees
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. In conclusion, I disagree with the statement large companies should provide equal remuneration to all the
employees
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. In every ,business every worker has a different position and
responsibility
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 . According to that, they get paid.

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