Global environmental issues are the responsibility of richer nations, not poorer ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Today, every country face environmental

issues

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, while developed countries have more problems related to

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. I believe that richer

nations

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could take responsibility for global environmental

issues

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because they have all the resources that would help them to overcome that environmental matters.

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with,

nations

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that are well developed have more environmental

issues

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such

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as air

pollution

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, water

pollution

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, global warming and some others too. All these happened due to more

industries

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, over-population and transportation that cause more

pollution

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. Especially, the industry and other chemical factories, have to reduce the usage of

industries

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less that will help a lot to prevent environmental

issues

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, a few years ago, a UN report, it had mentioned that if the developed countries control over there

industries

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then

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it will reduce

pollution

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all over the world but it did not happen. Moving

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, nowadays, everything needs money to do some work. Rich

nations

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have the money and power to control environmental

issues

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, poor nation has problem-related to basic things like proper water supply, food resources, roads, healthcare, academic and many others

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these countries do not have any

industries

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and other major material which leads to environmental problems.

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, only rich

nations

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have to face the environment and they are more responsible to create that global environmental problem. In conclusion, I feel that all regions come together to solve

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problem but rich

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have to control

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their

industries

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process and put some resources to solve

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. Poor

nations

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have to not worry about

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because they have more forests or trees than

industries

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or vehicles.

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