Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be a case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

In recent years the number of self-employed rose considerably.

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,

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is because they prefer to

work

for their own business,

instead

to

work

for a company. In

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and what are the potential disadvantages of working as a self-employed. In the

last

decade, the way

people

work

has drastically changed. In fact, more and more

people

prefer to start their own company.

Firstly

, working for yourself gives you more

indipendence

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independence

and flexibility. In fact, you can organise your day to day life as you prefer and not be stuck in a 9 to 5 job.

Secondly

, the reward and the motivation is much higher when you are working on something you invented or created.

Thirdly

, the career path could be more

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exiting

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as you can move forward at your own paste and not be stuck in the same job position for years because of your superior decision.

However

, when you start your own company or you simply

work

by yourself you are exposed to other risks and

responsabilities

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responsibilities

. Being

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self-employed is not easy at all, especially

the

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first

years.

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is because

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to the

people

that receive a fixed salary at the end of the month, nobody is paying you and you should be able to earn your own money.

Furthermore

, you don't have the same economic stability

of

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as

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someone whose employed.

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, because of

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it is harder for a self-employed to get a mortgage if you want to buy a house, or ask for

loan

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in

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your bank. In conclusion, many

people

prefer to

work

on their own because it gives them more freedom and motivation.

However

, it

also

comes with some disadvantages as nobody is giving you a salary and you have to be able

make

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the business working if you want to be

indipendent

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independent

.