You have seen an advertisement in the local newspaper for swimming lessons at your community sports centre. You want to find out more about these lessons. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In the letter describe how well you can swim at the moment explain why you want to learn to swim better enquire about the time and cost of the swimming lessons

Dear sir I am writing
this
letter to inquire about the swimming centre which has open recently in my area. I have seen an advertisement in the daily time's newspapers that the swimming centre is open now. I learnt swimming when I was 14 years old. I have intermediate skills. Now, I want to learn some advanced skills and want to become a good swimmer. I had
also
participated
last
year in a swimming competition in which I scored
the
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position. I see my future as a swimmer.
Moreover
, swimming is a very good exercise and
also
entertainment. It strongest the stamina of a swimmer. I
also
want to know what timings will be available and what will be the cost of swimming lessons. I hope you will consider me. Looking forward to hearing from you as soon. Yours sincerely vina
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