In some countries, employees are generally given two weeks of paid vacation time each year. In other countries, employees are given four or six weeks of paid vacation time. Considering the needs of both employee and employer, what do you think is a reasonable amount of paid vacation time for employees to have?

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the issue of the terms of paid holidays is frequently discussed due to its high importance. Some people believe that fourteen days per year is enough, while others may not agree. Personally, I support the opinion that
this
limit is not suitable for hard-working people and could lead to less business
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in general for a number of reasons and
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a point of view. Nowadays, our lives are overfull of stress and in
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it is closely connected with workplaces.
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why a huge number of workers try to organise their holidays far away from home and job community for the purpose of reloading and relaxing and,
as a result
, improving personal and working effectiveness. According to the latest research of psychologists, the
first
two weeks of the vacation does not bring
this
effect, because in
this
period we continue thinking about our routine and,
in addition
, worried about leisure activities.
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half of the month might be a waste of money for all companions.
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, there is no doubt that in the same period of time business processes are not stopped and the company should work as usual and management needs to make extra efforts for ensuring it.
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tasks to other co-workers and conformed their schedules
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is more complicated if the period is longer and
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situation even could provoke an increase of annoying.
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administrators
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tend to think, that long-term vacations relax too much and harmful for a business relationship. In conclusion, I would like to emphasize, that I support the idea about
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vacation in term more than two weeks and I strongly believe that it leads to success for all companies
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