More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work. What will be consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?

Nowadays, due to
lack
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of facilities in villages, many
people
are migrating to cities in order to find better employment opportunities. There are many consequences of
this
relocation
which
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could impact the growth of developing nations. In
this
essay, we will discuss the
repurcussions
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and some solutions which should be considered in order to minimise
this
movement to metro cities.
Firstly
, there would be a great impact on the agriculture of the country if
this
trend of relocations continues as there would be
less
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fewer

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people
left in the rural
areas
to do the farming activities. As a consequence, due to the shortage of resources, there would be a steep increase in the price of
the
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basic necessities
such
as grains, vegetables and fruits.
Secondly
, more and more
people
moving to metropolitan
areas
could cause mismanagement which would
further
result in
the
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increase in
crime
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rate in cities. As a solution, the authorities should plan some development activities
such
as proper education and building some industries in the rural
areas
which could be helpful in creating employment opportunities for the
people
living there. Another point to be considered is, the
people
in rural
areas
should be paid well so that they can maintain a sustainable lifestyle and afford basic facilities easily without moving to urban
areas
. In conclusion, the government in the developing nations should make sure to allocate
budget
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specifically for the betterment of the village
people
and creating employment options.
Also
,
this
would be helpful in the overall growth of the nation in future.
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