International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience?
Undoubtedly, Foreign
Tourism
has a plethora of advantages to both travellers and host
country
while there are serious negative consequences of International Tourism
which can be measured by taking some serious actions to Government and Local People, I would argue that these outweigh by the advantages.
On the one hand, There some aspects of tourism
which raises a cause of concern. Firstly
, The impact of the increase
in the tourist
Industry plummets to the concrete jungle in the host
country
which impacts the environment and local wildlife. For Instance
Thailand,Maldives,Andaman and Nicobar are lost their beautiful jungles and disappear from local animals due to an enormous increase
in construction.
Secondly
, The rise in pollution is the biggest and major issues. The tourist
littering the garbage near beaches,pond,lakes and jungles which has damaging environment such
as plastic and water pollution .,Also
increasing numbers of tourist
vehicles increase
the air pollution.
On the other hand
, International tourism
brought fortunate to the host
country
. It opens the door of development such
as Increase
revenue, Improves Infrastructure and Increase
employments. Foreign tourism
also
promotes business opportunity and Invites Foreign business delegacy. . Some host
countries economy backbone is tourism
such
as Switzerland,Thailand,Maldives and the Philippines.
In Conclusion, The advantages outweigh the disadvantages. The host
country
is Flourished to invite tourist
in their country
but Enviourment and local inhabitants issues are measured by taken some rigorous actions by government awareness.Submitted by aartieng248 on
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