Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger. What problems are associated with this trend? What are some possible solutions?
In these
days it's quite common that Change preposition
These
the
individuals are getting married and have kids in their thirties. For these Correct article usage
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people
they have many reasons among them Add a comma
,people
main
problem is they wanted to get settle better in the society and Correct article usage
the main
in addition
to this
even women
is behind for their individual carrer
.Correct your spelling
career
carrier
This
essay will discuss these problem scenario's, by considering opinion from both sides by using examples of Oxford University research and Time Magazine survey to demonstrate both points and support the claims.
On one hand, this
generation youngsters imagine, marriage is a responsibilty
so before, getting married they wanted to settle in their own stream. Correct your spelling
responsibility
Furthermore
, some people think it might even they might lose their freedom. For example
, Oxford University has conducted a
research in 2018 more than 90% of youth Correct article usage
apply
agree
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onagree
toagree
withagree
this
point and support this
statement. So, from this
example, it is clear that youth are not keen to get married before proper settlement.
On the other hand
, esspecially
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especially
women
of this
generation think, carrer
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career
first
marriage next
, women
these days completing with men and succeding
in every aspect of life. Correct your spelling
succeeding
Additionally
, women
has
become matured enough to choose at what age they are fit enough to give childbirth. Change the verb form
have
Simillarly
, a survey of Time Magazine in 2019 has conducted in many parts of world nearly 95% Correct your spelling
Similarly
women
has
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have
aggreed
to Correct your spelling
agreed
this
point. So, Similarlly
it is clear that they are behind their career Correct your spelling
Similarly
ratherthan
marriage.
To conclude, youth has a clear mindset on their goals and Correct your spelling
rather than
marraige
. Correct your spelling
marriage
Moreover
, women
has
keen knowledge in giving birth to a kid. Change the verb form
have
Finally
, solution
I can say is Add an article
the solution
a solution
get
married at 27 age have Fix the infinitive
to get
child
by 30 that will give space to enjoy with your kids and goals.Add an article
a child
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