The number of older people is increasing. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
There are more accustomed
people
in the world and it is enhancing day
by day
. The main positive side is to the fruitful output of the province and actual negative point is to create an
unnecessary things for the state for Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
sometimes
. Correct your spelling
some time
This
essay will discuss the merits of extending the grown up
Add a hyphen
grown-up
person
and also
describe the demerits of accelarating
of adult men and women.
One of the positive is old Correct your spelling
accelerating
acceleration
people
are the strength for the country
. Many critical decisions can be taken possible
by them. Not only that Change the adjective
possibly
person
who are
too age to provide idea at the same time but Change the verb form
is
also
accomplish any tasks very quickly. Thus
, an accustomed person
can create acceptibility
in Correct your spelling
acceptability
accessibility
the
society Correct article usage
apply
everyday
. Replace the word
every day
In addition
, they can help various types of young human's task while it is not possible to do by the teenage men and women. For instance
, various types of keeping pet animals, domestic beasts can be kept by the old people
where they can provide a fruitful output for the country
. However
, elder people
has also
provided a
same output.
Despite Change the article
the
of
the positive sides, old Remove the preposition
apply
people
cannot survive in the world more. Firstly
, their physical stamina reduce
Change the verb form
reduces
day
by day
. Secondly
, they cannot remind any critical data where it could be exposed from one side. Thirdly
, Add a hyphen
over-aged
over aged
persons cannot do any physical works where it creates a lot of hinder for the Correct your spelling
overaged
country
. For example
, loading and unloading materials are not possible to carry by the old ones as they have a
very Correct article usage
apply
few
energy. Correct quantifier usage
little
On the contrary
, youngs are very energitic
.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
energetic
increasing
old Add an article
an increasing
person
can affect the development of the country
. However
, there must be a working scope of young people
otherwise
it creates a lot of physical pressure on the accustomed.Submitted by Sadiq on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...