The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pictures illustrate how the
wave-enery
Correct your spelling
wave-energy
wave-every
machine
is designed and different options to locate the engine.
Overall
, it is clear that
this
machinery is initiated by water and go
through chambers Correct subject-verb agreement
goes
consisted
of turbines in order to generate Wrong verb form
consisting
the
electricity generator. Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
, there are two options to consider in terms of where to place the machine
and their corresponding costs due to
the altitude of waves
.
The process begins with the entry of waves which will raise the water level in the first chamber, at the same time, there is an Correct article usage
the waves
air flow
entering the Correct your spelling
airflow
second
chamber at the top causing the first turbine to spin. By increasing
the height of the water will make the blades of the Change preposition
Increasing
second
turbine the
spin, which is located below the first one. The turning motions of the two turbines will Correct article usage
apply
generates
the electricity generator
Change the verb form
generate
In addition
, there are two factors to consider about the locations of the wave-energy machine
which are the size of the wave and the cost for
installing the Change preposition
of
machine
. If this
engine is placed where it is close to the shore then
the installation costs will be cheaper compared to placing it further
from the land, but it will receive only small waves.Submitted by vynguyen300673 on
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