The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictures illustrate how the
wave-enery
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wave-energy
wave-every
machine
is designed and different options to locate the engine.
Overall
,
it is clear that
this
machinery is initiated by water and
go
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through chambers
consisted
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of turbines in order to generate
the
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electricity generator.
Moreover
, there are two options to consider in terms of where to place the
machine
and their corresponding costs
due to
the altitude of
waves
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the waves
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. The process begins with the entry of waves which will raise the water level in the first chamber, at the same time, there is an
air flow
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airflow
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entering the
second
chamber at the top causing the first turbine to spin.
By increasing
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the height of the water will make the blades of the
second
turbine
the
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spin, which is located below the first one. The turning motions of the two turbines will
generates
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the electricity generator
In addition
, there are two factors to consider about the locations of the wave-energy
machine
which are the size of the wave and the cost
for
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of
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installing the
machine
. If
this
engine is placed where it is close to the shore
then
the installation costs will be cheaper compared to placing it
further
from the land, but it will receive only small waves.
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