The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pictures illustrate how the

wave-enery

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wave-energy

wave-every

machine

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is designed and different options to locate the engine.

Overall

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it is clear that

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this

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machinery is initiated by water and

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goes

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through chambers

consisted

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consisting

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of turbines in order to generate

the

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apply

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electricity generator.

Moreover

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, there are two options to consider in terms of where to place the

machine

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and their corresponding costs

due to

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the altitude of

waves

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the waves

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. The process begins with the entry of waves which will raise the water level in the first chamber, at the same time, there is an

air flow

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airflow

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entering the

second

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chamber at the top causing the first turbine to spin.

By increasing

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Increasing

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the height of the water will make the blades of the

second

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turbine

the

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apply

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spin, which is located below the first one. The turning motions of the two turbines will

generates

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generate

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the electricity generator

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, there are two factors to consider about the locations of the wave-energy

machine

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which are the size of the wave and the cost

for

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installing the

machine

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. If

this

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engine is placed where it is close to the shore

then

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the installation costs will be cheaper compared to placing it

further

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from the land, but it will receive only small waves.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "second".

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words machine with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "waves" was used 4 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

205 words

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