Some people think that teenagers should follow the example of older people. Others think that it is natural for teenagers to challenge what older people say. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many
society
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societies
believe
that teenagers should listen to their elders' advice and guidance, while others say that they should be allowed to pick their own path. In my essay, I will clarify both concepts and present my point of view.
On the one hand, some individuals feel that older family are trustworthy because they have more knowledge and experience. Change the verb form
believes
That is
to say, these community
have already faced severe life events and have developed techniques to deal with them, which they may share with others. As a consequence, by following their counsel and advice, a young adult may undoubtedly acquire a variety of lessons that will benefit him or her in the future. Children raised by grandparents, Change the determiner
communities
for example
, are more likely to have a good sense of humour and personality as a
outcome of their grandparents' advice and behaviour.
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an
On the other hand
, others believe that following in the footsteps of previous generations is no longer appropriate for teens in this
day of science and technology. community's lives has
become simpler as Change the verb form
have
a
event of recent technological advancements. As a development, the precedents provided by previous generations are no longer relevant to the younger generations. To provide an example, in agriculture, it is more useful for young folk to utilize agricultural technology and tools that increase the efficiency and speed of farming labour than it is for Change the article
an
older
crowd to employ conventional farming methods.
Add an article
the older
Finally
, it is clear from both the debate and the evidence that both arguments are equally strong and significant. I personally believe that young family should follow the direction and examples of older
public since they offer the finest lessons and skills.Add an article
the older
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite