Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

With the constant growth of civilization, our mother nature is facing various problems nowadays.

Although

there are debated views regarding the same, some feel the extinction of numerous

species

of living beings

are

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the main issue

which

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should be given the most importance. I,

however

, believe that there are other matters which are more severe than the loss of few particular

species

which I will discuss in

this

essay. Indeed, several types of animals and plants have been extinct with the

changes

in

environment

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the environment

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.

This

can be best explained by referring to Darwin’s theory of ‘The survival of the

fittest’

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fittest

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, which means the climate

changes

influence the

changes

in the body structures or the characteristics of animals or plants. The theory

further

says that the

species

which fails to cope with the

changes

in the atmosphere,

however

,

unfortunately

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get extinct.

Species

such

as Dinosaurs,

for example

, got extinct for the reason

abovementioned

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above mentioned

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.

This

nevertheless

, is inevitable even without any detrimental effects on the environment. Another group, including me, believes that there are several other problems which are more important. Certainly, global warming is one of them. The ice in both North Pole and

South

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Pole is melting at an alarming rate due to the increasing temperature worldwide, resulting in an increase in the water level in oceans. Many beaches in the southern part of India,

for instance

, have gone underwater for the same. Another major environmental issue on the current date is air pollution. The pollutants in the emission from the factories and the fumes from the cars on the road are causing air pollution at a threatening rate, which directly causing severe respiratory diseases to

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humankind. In my opinion, these issues are more severe and need immediate measures to be curbed. In conclusion, the loss of a variety of flora and fauna are definitely one of the major issues caused by climate

changes

.

Nevertheless

, I personally feel the problems like global warming and air pollution have more detrimental effects on all sorts of living beings on today’s earth.