The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The use of
vehicle
has been on
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the rise
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rise
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ever since the invention of the
first
car. Vehicles have made our lives easier in various aspects and have been used for
transportaion
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transportation
of good as well as to travel to different locations. Nowadays, people like have their own
vehicle
and prefer to
travle
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travel
by it on a daily basis.
Although
it has proven to be a boon to our society, there are some
demrits
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demerits
to it . It is agreed that alternative forms of transport should be encouraged by governments by introducing laws to control car ownership and use. Analysing its negative impact on
environment
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and
increase
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of
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traffic on roads will prove
this
. In today's world, people prefer to have their own
vehicle
. Due to the increase in car ownership, people are less likely to use public transport and prefer to travel by their own
vehicle
more.
This
has increased the count of vehicles on road and
hence
increased the air pollution. Air pollution has
negative
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impact not just on
environment
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the environment
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but
also
on human beings. It has detrimental effects on
immune
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the immune
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system and
therefore
render
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us more vulnerable to other diseases.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reliance on
  • regulate
  • traffic congestion
  • pollution
  • public health
  • sustainable development
  • alternative forms of transport
  • car ownership
  • balancing benefits and drawbacks
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