In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?
In
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contemporary era, crime has drastically grown up in many countries. Even more, the offence has become more violent when compared to the past. Many reasons behind these crimes, it might be poverty,unemployment or legal issue on properties. Linking Words
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On one hand, developing countries are having unemployment problem due to Linking Words
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even poverty level has multiplied in number. Linking Words
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, it will show on their kids that will impact directly on their education and that will impact the Linking Words
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, lack of employment opportunities will motivate people to make more offence for easy money. Linking Words
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, in a survey of Time Magazine in 2015, the statistics clearly suggest 90% of the crime is from underdeveloped and developing countries. So, it is clear that unemployment in these parts of the world is high, Linking Words
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is the major cause for these situations.
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On the other hand
, the increase in violence is because of films. Nowadays, cinema is into every house by use of television, violence based movies have increased in large number. Predominantly, the government has to emphasize Linking Words
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, increase the employment opportunities and literacy rate to solve Linking Words
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To conclude, When you have skilled labour that country will have a number of jobs opportunities. Linking Words
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, it will decrease violence in that country. Linking Words
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, the government should focus on education and jobs and educate them to decrease offence.Linking Words
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