In recent times, economic growth has helped many become richer, both in developed and developing countries. However, those in developed countries are not as happy as they were in the past. Why is this? What can be learned from this?

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It has been suggested by some that
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have been getting richer as the flourish of the economy around the world, while residents living in the developed nations are getting unhappy than they were.
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is an appalling result of the change of lifestyle. The lesson should be gained from
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trend which is
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is unable to satisfy all demands.
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of all, most individuals, particularly young generations, would feel they have been spending less leisure time with their family and friends,
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resulting in a lack of intimacy. The reason is that after working, they
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need to stay back to do extra work in order to earn more
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sometimes.
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, when they have spare time, they are so exhausted that they just stay alone
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of interacting with others.
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, they do not have enough friends or family members to share their feelings, which contributes to loneliness and
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.
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, most office-workers who are working and living in New York say that
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more
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they are able to earn nowadays through overloads work, they feel more anxious and upset than they were. The detailed understanding of
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dreadful situation is that
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is not powerful. Everyone should enjoy their life by communicating with each other to satisfy their emotional and mental needs while working hard to follow the rapid developing speed,
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, individuals will be depressed. As an illustration, some successful businessmen point out that previously they paid their all energies and time into working to earn more
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.
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, when their dreams have been come true, they did not feel satisfaction as nobody can share their happiness, which causes their emotions
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empty. In conclusion,
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people
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may vary in their opinions about the reason why
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are getting unhappy despite the fact that they have more
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. I think that the different lifestyle is the main reason, and
people
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should adjust their opinions about earning
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and enjoying life to suit
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change.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic growth
  • Material wealth
  • Affluent societies
  • Social cohesion
  • Isolation and loneliness
  • Work-related stress
  • Professional expectations
  • Aspirations and reality
  • Environmental degradation
  • Sustainability
  • Consumerism
  • Comparison
  • Life balance
  • Mental well-being
  • Community relationships
  • Sustainable development
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