In surveys Mason City residents rank water sports (swimming, boating and fishing) among their favorite recreational activities

While it may be true that the Mason

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government ought to devote more money to riverside recreational facilities,

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does not make a cogent case for increased resources based on

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. It is easy to understand why

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residents

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would want a cleaner

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, but

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argument

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is rife with holes and assumptions, and

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, not strong enough to lead to increased funding. Citing surveys of

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residents

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, the

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reports

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resident's love of

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sports

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. It is not clear,

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, the scope and validity of that

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could have asked

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if they prefer using the

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for

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or would like to see a hydroelectric dam built, which may have swayed

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toward

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. The sample may not have been representative of

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residents

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, asking only those

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who live upon the

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. The

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may have been 10 pages long, with 2 questions dedicated to

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. We just do not know. Unless the

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is fully representative, valid, and reliable, it can not be used to effectively back the

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.

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, the

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implies that

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do not

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the

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for swimming, boating, and fishing, despite their professed interest, because the

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is polluted and smelly. While a polluted, smelly

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would likely cut down on

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sports

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, a concrete connection between the resident's lack of

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and the

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's current state is not effectively made. Though there have been complaints, we do not know if there have been numerous complaints from a wide range of people, or perhaps from one or two individuals who made numerous complaints. To strengthen his/her

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would benefit from implementing a normed

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asking a wide range of

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why they do not currently

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the

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. Building upon the implication that

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do not

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the

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due to the

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of the

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's

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and the smell, the

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suggests that a

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clean up will result in increased

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usage. If the

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's

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quality

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and smell result from problems

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can be cleaned,

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may be true.

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, if the decreased

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quality

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and aroma

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caused by pollution by factories along the

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,

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conceivably could be remedied. But if the

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and aroma

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from the natural mineral deposits in the

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or surrounding rock,

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may not be true. There are some bodies of

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emit a strong smell of sulphur due to the geography of the area.

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is not something likely to be

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affected

by a clean-up.

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, a

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clean up may have no impact upon

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usage. Regardless of whether the

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is able to be improved or not, the

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does not effectively show a connection between

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quality

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and

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usage. A clean, beautiful, safe

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often adds to a

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's property values, leads to increased tourism and revenue from those who come to take advantage of the

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, and a better overall

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of life for

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. For these reasons,

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government may decide to invest in improving riverside recreational facilities.

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is not likely

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persuade the

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government

to allocate increased funding.