You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter • describe the problem with the equipment • explain what happened when you phoned the shop • say what you would like the manager to do.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with your company, I have been your customer for 5 years now and never had a problem unsolved by your employees before. On 22nd May I bought a black blender with a glass cup of the Oster brand in your store.
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, when I got home I noticed a
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switch and
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was missing its lid.
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, I immediately phoned your company to ask what happened, because I bought a new appliance and not an open box. Peter, the manager in charge told me to return it with the purchase receipt and in 3 business days I would receive a new one, but 10 days went by and I
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without it. I would like to request a refund or a new one right away. Please write to me as soon as possible and let me know how much longer I will have to wait. I look forward to a swift resolution. Yours faithfully, Diego Gutierrez.
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