Many people believe that social networking sites such as facebook have had a huge negative impact on individual and society.To what extent do you agree

Recently, the impact of social media on both individual and
society
is seen as a widespread
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concern.It is assumed that it has negative effects
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people
.I strongly disagree with
this
notion because social network gives
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for opportunities and
also
it helps in the development of the
society
.
Firstly
, networking channels
such
as Facebook, Instagram among others has created a lot of privileges for both
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young and old
people
. Many job seekers recently are able to get jobs through different sources,
this
is due to the fact that various businesses
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to do their advertisement by using
this
medium.
This
has reduced the no of unemployed
people
. To illustrate
this
, the popular Unilever company do make use of their
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page to recruit their workers, they employed the individual with the highest number of likes on their page.
Furthermore
,the effect of social network cannot be overlooked as it helps
society
to gain more popularity and increase the economy of the community. Literally, the development made on
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social site's has made various societies to be recognized based on the attributes and the peculiarities they
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.
For example
, there is a popular group on Facebook that showcase different customs and tourism attractions in different towns,
this
has increased the number of
people
visiting
such
places and sometimes it makes
people
to
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set up their business in
such
areas.
However
, social media
such
as WhatsApp,the Telegram has its own demerits because it contributes to
increase
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crime rate in
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society
.
For instance
,
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research conducted in Nigeria in 2020 which polled out over 3000
people
showed that the majority of fraud recently is
as a result
of social media. In conclusion,it is obvious that networking sites has a great benefits bro both the individual and the
society
at large as it helps in creating opportunities and improvement in the
society
.
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